Feels like it should be the start of a poem, doesn’t it?
On a lazy, rainy Sunday
lonely drops seek company
only to be driven apart by ignorant tires
unaware of what it’s like to be the rain
on a lazy, rainy Sunday.
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quick edit – Maybe the lines ought to be –
On a lazy, rainy Sunday
lonely drops seek company
only to be driven apart by tired ignorance,
those unaware of what it’s like to be the rain
on a lazy, rainy Sunday.
Which do you like better?
Both. The second doesn’t quite have the same nuance without the first.
I wasn’t sure if the play on words would work. Maybe I’ll take another run at it the next time it rains.